author's note: this version suitable for a young woman graduate
versions also written for: all graduates; and a young man.
to the graduate
remarkable not only for great obstacles overcome,
but for the daily challenges which slowly shape
both mind and soul;
the passage has led you here,
to a threshold,
where much lies ahead and this much behind:
you have finished the course
first set before you such a long time ago,
then a child - now a woman;
look out at the world set before you!
the fiery dawn at the edge of an uncertain future.
look out and learn:
courage alone may alter your fate,
but not as often,
or as well,
as courage coupled with knowledge!
strength by itself may prove a sufficient aid
in times of trouble, but a much better
and more lasting friend
is strength guided by wisdom!
though your journey be far from finished
or close to its close,
when you have learned these truths
you will lend to your life a meaning
far beyond the shallow boundaries of time;
you will triumph over mere circumstance;
and answer with somber confidence
the very voice of God.
from: At the Water’s Edge
Copyright © 1997, 1998
by J.D. Deutschendorf